Friday, 16 October 2015

My favourite chocolate bar

It is hard to decide what your favourite chocolate bar is because there is so many to choose from. My favourite chocolate- the Dairy Milk Oreo bar. I like this because it has little chunks of Oreo and a cream coating with a smooth coat of milk chocolate over it. As you put it in your mouth it is like a little bit of magic.

4 comments:

  1. I like how you described the inside of the chocolate bar. I also liked how you used a simile, "As you put it in your mouth its like a little bit of magic." Could you ask a question, like asking us our favourite chocolate bar?

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  2. I like how you described the inside of the chocolate bar. I also liked how you used a simile, "As you put it in your mouth its like a little bit of magic." Could you ask a question, like asking us our favourite chocolate bar?

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  3. I like how you described the inside of the chocolate bar. I also liked how you used a simile, "As you put it in your mouth its like a little bit of magic." Could you ask a question, like asking us our favourite chocolate bar?

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  4. Do you have a favourite chocolate bar?

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